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Post by ~Bunu~ on Fri Feb 15, 2008 2:55 pm

Yay I'm glad to say it we made finally the A.B Corporation with our own server <.<
I know we need to improve but we started to make movies with aBeas'

.{DL}.Bunuel~ as director Very Happy
.{DL}.aBeas' as Actor and Writer Very Happy
Sounds Good Razz

The series of the Adventures of Nitro starts with this episode enjoy it :



Need to improve with the fight but we'll do with the others. They will follow soon Wink


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Post by E-Nig on Fri Feb 15, 2008 2:59 pm

If you want I can help translate lines.

Like make them more Englishy.
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Post by ~Bunu~ on Fri Feb 15, 2008 3:02 pm

E-Nig wrote:If you want I can help translate lines.

Like make them more Englishy.

You talk about which ones Rolling Eyes

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Post by Abz' on Fri Feb 15, 2008 3:04 pm

This film is so awesome >.<
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Post by E-Nig on Fri Feb 15, 2008 3:05 pm

Let him rests in piece.
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Post by login* on Fri Feb 15, 2008 4:05 pm

realy nice movie Smile Surprised
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Post by Zach on Fri Feb 15, 2008 8:23 pm

I would like to help in the movies, i get bored oftn lol, btw nice movie. IP for ur server bunue?

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Post by ~Bunu~ on Sat Feb 16, 2008 12:59 am

Zach wrote:I would like to help in the movies, i get bored oftn lol, btw nice movie. IP for ur server bunue?

So the only problem is that you can't see my server in the "internet" list and you need to connect by my own IP <.<
But my IP is dynamic >.>

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Post by *Hule* on Sat Feb 16, 2008 1:02 am

That was way better than I expected.
Actually that was pleasant to watch, I didn't want to stop. Smile

Only two things would be good to change:

The force = The Force with capital letter F. I'm very strict about that.
The duel between the jedi and the sith could've been a bit shorter, or they could've jumped somewhere else and the duel continued there.
And the camera during the duel could've moved a little.

But that was brilliant, I liked especially the part where the jedi remembered his father and how the sith had no mercy for him.
It would've been more 'jedi-like' if he had spared the sith's life, though.
That way you had gotten continuation for the film. Very Happy

Overall that was a good movie. ^^

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Post by ~Bunu~ on Sat Feb 16, 2008 1:12 am

*Hule* wrote:That was way better than I expected.
Actually that was pleasant to watch, I didn't want to stop. Smile

Only two things would be good to change:

The force = The Force with capital letter F. I'm very strict about that.
The duel between the jedi and the sith could've been a bit shorter, or they could've jumped somewhere else and the duel continued there.
And the camera during the duel could've moved a little.

But that was brilliant, I liked especially the part where the jedi remembered his father and how the sith had no mercy for him.
It would've been more 'jedi-like' if he had spared the sith's life, though.
That way you had gotten continuation for the film. Very Happy

Overall that was a good movie. ^^

Thanks for the comment , I loved it =P
That's the only problem I put Fraps on another computer and I played as the Reborn so I couldn't move with the other Neutral
But if you liked it =D The Force...kk

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Post by *Hule* on Sat Feb 16, 2008 1:27 am

Keep up the good work, mates.
I'm looking forward to seeing more work by you chaps. Smile

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Post by Raschu on Sat Feb 16, 2008 1:38 am

I didn't know they had an earth holiday at Bespin =P

anyways, everything happend a bit randomly, first that bar scene and POOF there where the imperials, then just some minuts later walking arround on an empty bespin surtainly the sith that killed Nitro's father comes out to kill nitro...

it doesn't makes allot of sence really...

I'm not saying this to be mean, but I say it to help writing the script, I have some exp. with that simce I did allot of SW comics with lego.

Anyways the feeling is well set but the story goes somewhat to fast, try to slow it down a bit and add some more character building...

still a good job!

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Post by Huni on Sat Feb 16, 2008 1:45 am

It is really nice
I would like to help you guys with the next episodes Wink
I want to see more Very Happy
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Post by WaterBottle on Sat Feb 16, 2008 2:12 am

That was nice actually. Buy you guys forgot "Special thanks to WaterBottle" Laughing
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Post by Abz' on Sat Feb 16, 2008 3:10 am

WaterBottle wrote:That was nice actually. Buy you guys forgot "Special thanks to WaterBottle" Laughing

indeed Laughing

Special thanks to WaterBottle and his own sig Laughing Laughing
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Post by Falc0n on Sat Feb 16, 2008 3:20 am

That was not bad But like said before its really random try to fill in the gaps and try to shorten some scenes or its to long. Like the duel go to other places stop have some dialoque and then continue. But not bad at all!

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Post by C.O.L.I.N. on Sat Feb 16, 2008 1:35 pm

very nice Smile i agree to most points with Hule Smile i liked the falshback but i dint enjoy the long duel from only 1 (ok maybe 2 >.>) camera position at least it became better at the end. Also gonna say the same and add more cuz i find dthem important:

1. script is good but direction and sciptwriting has to be communictae even more
2. try to film a scene some times. it would make editing even harder but the result will be even better
3. dont add scenes just to add. imagine ur result and then film

and now part that i blieve its really important in jk2 movies. DUEL:
1. dont make them long. if u want to make them more than it should be make them inetersting
2. use a combination of many moves
3. dont kick so much
4. a moving camera and from many different angles may give a really good result and action in ur duel

Dman i also gonna start making some movies i have in my mind for months now XD ( i hope i make it with my single core CPU... >.>)
Also a help form others members wil make a film way better Wink ask it, im sure they will offer it Smile
anyway keep it up guys Wink
gratz again ^^

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Post by ~Bunu~ on Sat Feb 16, 2008 2:05 pm

I liked these comments Huley and Jim , Jermaine <3
That will help us for sure Smile
I'll hope that I will remember everything that you said for the second episode lol...

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Post by Loading on Sat Feb 16, 2008 3:28 pm

It would have been better if instead of the bloke saying that he will DIE! when he is doing an emote you cant kill him, instead he has to undo that emote and then get killed, which we never see.

Maybe have that person bind /kill so that it looks better =]

Otherwise probably your best so far lads - keep it up Wink
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Post by Razor on Sat Feb 16, 2008 8:43 pm

Have people do voices like matt did, that way its btter to watch


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Post by ~Bunu~ on Sun Feb 17, 2008 1:55 am

Razor wrote:Have people do voices like matt did, that way its btter to watch


And its no mercy*

Not pity xD

Awesome Laughing
Kk Embarassed And actually my voice is shitty I'll need some voice <.<

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Post by Raschu on Sun Feb 17, 2008 2:09 am

I can help <_<

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Post by Falc0n on Sun Feb 17, 2008 3:07 am

he doesnt want shitty voices ras. jk Xd yea there are plenty people that want to help

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Post by ~Bunu~ on Sun Feb 17, 2008 8:45 am

Yay I'll need severals voices ; I'll tell you when I'll have finished episodes 2 & 3 and when I'll need it Wink

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Post by Matthew on Sun Feb 17, 2008 9:34 am

Try some editing and filming techniques. Stylized violence etc, like Tarantino movies xD
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