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Yet another song: Wake Me Up

Post by Raschu on Wed Nov 03, 2010 3:01 pm

I recorded another original song this day.



This is based on really old lyrics that I wrote years ago. It's a little cheesy here and there but I like the recording quality of this song.

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Re: Yet another song: Wake Me Up

Post by Saint on Wed Nov 03, 2010 4:58 pm

wow a lot clearer and more fluent than 'Radio Radio'
I liked this one more Wink

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Re: Yet another song: Wake Me Up

Post by Tony* on Thu Nov 04, 2010 4:55 am

You made a typo at "weakness" ;O
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Re: Yet another song: Wake Me Up

Post by Xris² on Thu Nov 04, 2010 9:14 am

At least I didn't puke this time.
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Re: Yet another song: Wake Me Up

Post by Raschu on Thu Nov 04, 2010 9:36 am

Xris² wrote:At least I didn't puke this time.

at least I still don't care Razz

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Re: Yet another song: Wake Me Up

Post by Storm on Thu Nov 04, 2010 9:47 am

Hm, you getting better Smile

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Re: Yet another song: Wake Me Up

Post by lone on Thu Nov 04, 2010 10:00 am

He is getting better.
I only have a problem with the stress in a lot of sentences. I don't really know how to explain it's really weird. But you're a good sing. I wish I could sing like that too.

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Re: Yet another song: Wake Me Up

Post by Raschu on Thu Nov 04, 2010 10:02 am

lone wrote:He is getting better.
I only have a problem with the stress in a lot of sentences. I don't really know how to explain it's really weird. But you're a good sing. I wish I could sing like that too.

I guess it's do too the fact I don't have that much lung(sp?) power (asthmatic).

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Re: Yet another song: Wake Me Up

Post by lone on Thu Nov 04, 2010 10:08 am

It could be but I don't think so. I can't explain I'm sorry.

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Re: Yet another song: Wake Me Up

Post by Raschu on Thu Nov 04, 2010 10:09 am

lone wrote:It could be but I don't think so. I can't explain I'm sorry.

In het Nederlands dan?

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Re: Yet another song: Wake Me Up

Post by *Hule* on Thu Nov 04, 2010 12:56 pm

Just a quick off-topic.. I've always wondered what that (sp?) means? Someone explain it to me.

And very nice Ras indeed

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Re: Yet another song: Wake Me Up

Post by Raschu on Thu Nov 04, 2010 1:38 pm

*Hule* wrote:Just a quick off-topic.. I've always wondered what that (sp?) means? Someone explain it to me.

It stands for 'spelling', when you are not sure if you spelled something right.

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Re: Yet another song: Wake Me Up

Post by Tony* on Thu Nov 04, 2010 4:52 pm

soms benadruk je bepaalde woorden.. denk ik dat Lone bedoeld.. xD
Maar jong gij hebt een rawrrr stemmeke. :>

Misschien een voorbeeld (waarvan ik denk dat Lone bedoeld.. Razz):
"Thoughts" bij 0:49
"understand" bij 1:03

^-- hoewel het ook aan mij kan liggen, ik vind de uitspraak wat.. Nederlands ofzo hahaha moeilijk uit te leggen.. ^^'
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Re: Yet another song: Wake Me Up

Post by Boomlala on Thu Nov 04, 2010 6:32 pm

I'll give my professional critique during the weekend.

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Re: Yet another song: Wake Me Up

Post by lone on Fri Nov 05, 2010 10:09 am

Tony* wrote:soms benadruk je bepaalde woorden.. denk ik dat Lone bedoeld.. xD
Maar jong gij hebt een rawrrr stemmeke. :>

Misschien een voorbeeld (waarvan ik denk dat Lone bedoeld.. Razz):
"Thoughts" bij 0:49
"understand" bij 1:03

^-- hoewel het ook aan mij kan liggen, ik vind de uitspraak wat.. Nederlands ofzo hahaha moeilijk uit te leggen.. ^^'
ja zeker bij "understand".
tis echt gwn moelijk uit te leggen. heeft ras wel niet veel aan natuurlijk =p

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Re: Yet another song: Wake Me Up

Post by Torres on Fri Nov 05, 2010 12:11 pm

Biertje?

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