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Post by Falc0n on Tue May 11, 2010 1:52 pm

HI ALL ITS DONE episode 1

all acting is done by myself so is the editting Smile Voice acting done by: our own Xavior! and Kal and Ilkay!
Let me know this is my first one ever so Very Happy ( by my own) had alot of limits but tried to get the best out of it!

If you cant see it yet W8 dont post then.. LET ME KNOW YOUR OPINIONS!!!


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Post by Ross on Tue May 11, 2010 2:12 pm

great job falcon it looks great
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Post by Grazor on Tue May 11, 2010 2:16 pm

hahahah damn, i sound like an idiot, oh well. EPISODE 2 FALCON!!!!!

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Post by Raschu on Tue May 11, 2010 3:18 pm

Lol one of the henchman is called Yiff Razz

anyway nice movie!

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Post by Storm on Tue May 11, 2010 4:18 pm

yeah well done maine Very Happy

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Post by Xavior on Tue May 11, 2010 7:49 pm

Cons:
I spot some minor mistakes here and there, I get a feeling "fade to black" is a bit overused, some scenes can be a little stretchy. And I was not to fond of the Pure blue text with strong white glow. Could perhaps have placed a simple outlined text on the sky as you tilt down?. And the voice acting and npc sounds should be matched a bit more on the volume side. These are my initial thoughts.

Pros:
But Apart from these petty things I found above this is pretty good concidering you've done most of this work by your self. Good camera flow with nice angles, music fits the parts, starting sequence on Mos Eisley was great really helped to set a mood of the scene.

Hope this was the kind of critique you were after.

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Post by Falc0n on Tue May 11, 2010 11:42 pm

Yes i was xavior:D
and i totally agree o n the fade outs ( i fount out transitions in the end of the movie so i will use that in episode 2 more) and i know the mistakes Razz there are some timeline mistakes as well but ah well thats because a few scenes were mixed up in the progresss because it would fit better! About the volume i already worked on that for the next episode so Smile everything you said was noticed Very Happy! and the voice actors also know this they said it themselves so it will be fine!!! About the text thanks alot i will work on that

@ other: Thanks for the comments!

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Post by C.O.L.I.N. on Wed May 12, 2010 2:47 am

lol Vegard's post saved me a lot fo time typing the exact same thoughts xD
So Xav's * 2 Razz

But i have to say again u did a really good job considering u did all these stuff by ur own Wink
And good u finished it fast, i thought it would take u months xD

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Post by daryo on Wed May 12, 2010 4:18 am

pony tale guy's voice sux. so does the voice of the bounthunter at the beginning.

rest is ok.

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Post by Saint on Wed May 12, 2010 6:35 am

just Ilkay needs to add more exclamation to his dub..
but srsly shooting awful lot of work in such short time.. very very well done Jermaine..
definitely the most attractive plot and best directing so far.. looking forward to next episodes Smile

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Post by Grazor on Wed May 12, 2010 6:41 am

Yeah i sounded so like robotic, i wanna sound more fluent and normal haha

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Post by login* on Wed May 12, 2010 9:42 am

i like this story line =D .... but why would u have warm clothing in a warm planet ????
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Post by Falc0n on Wed May 12, 2010 10:43 am

Thanks all!! ill do my best Smile And the voices will be worked on Smile the voice actors said it them selfs so we will try out best!! Im thinking of a nice plot line for episode 2 Smile so! These episodes are for you guys to keep you warm till crow and me work together again Smile
Btw any ideas suggestions for plots are welcome! If you want some nice character tell me and ill see what i can do! VOice actors are more then welcome because we have limited actors!

I didnt do voice overs my self ( pony tail guy is Sio barada from the Falcon Stories the one with the scar) but he hasnt have it yet im trying to show it in these episodes how he got it!

@ Login: We will explain later ( the clothes thing) because i want diffrent costumes:) and i already used the shirt for opening scene didnt want to use it again but it will be fine i guess Smile!!

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Post by Boomlala on Wed May 12, 2010 11:40 am

I can do voice acting if one requires. Is it in a live-chat, or do we pre-record lines?

I'm Belgian so a barrage of accents are accessible.

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Post by Falc0n on Wed May 12, 2010 11:58 am

~@ boom there are more people that arent english so Smile
and its your choice some guy likes to record it live in msn or something like i give a line and he records it so i can listen to it and say try this and this so he does it again and i immediatly got it OR i can send you your lines and you record everything like by line and name the file as the line like when you have to say: Hi i am boom save it as Hi i am boom
and then send me over msn or in a rar or whatever

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Post by Xavior on Wed May 12, 2010 1:44 pm

I prefer, getting the script.

Then I can say the lines of the others so I can have a conversation with my self. And then I remove any noise or re-record if I get any hard breaths on the mic.
I'm always up to more parts Maine, human or not Razz
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Post by Falc0n on Wed May 12, 2010 1:55 pm

I will xavior i will write you something cool!

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Post by Boomlala on Wed May 12, 2010 2:28 pm

Write anything you want for me. Give directions if there's something specific you want.

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Post by Xavior on Wed May 12, 2010 3:08 pm

K if this doesn't work out, I'll move it back Razz
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Post by lone on Wed May 12, 2010 3:26 pm

I wana see what happens next !!!

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Post by C.O.L.I.N. on Thu May 13, 2010 2:49 am

THe bomb explodes and the planet is destroyed because he accidentally threw a super bomb from a galaxy far far away (they r really powerful over there 0o!), and so all die, an then after many years a group of military scientists, discover a part of dna that somehow remained untached and they make it human which is no other than Sio Barada (!!!) but because their technik wasnt flawless he has a mark on his face, along his eye!!! (yes that how he got it) and then the normal Falcon stories take place.

There, now u know mr green

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Post by Falc0n on Thu May 13, 2010 3:33 am

THANKS COLLIN -.- now i wont be needing to make the movies -.- SIGH...

lol :Pnice touch btw Razz my first intention was to give them the scars because of the bomb but i thought that was 2 dull.. but i got some things in my mind and i have to try them out so
Its not that the story is about the scars but maybe you guys wondered why he has them or something

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Post by Saint on Thu May 13, 2010 5:48 am

yay I didn't read Dimitri the Bitch's spoiler, moved my eyes away at last second... mr green

lol I did female voice for Matt's 24 series, it was very unflattering

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Post by C.O.L.I.N. on Thu May 13, 2010 7:25 am

Saint wrote:yay I didn't read Dimitri the Bitch's spoiler, moved my eyes away at last second... mr green
Eren biatch >;D

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Post by Ross on Thu May 13, 2010 11:04 am

did you start making episode 2 yet
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