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That was not bad But like said before its really random try to fill in the gaps and try to shorten some scenes or its to long. Like the duel go to other places stop have some dialoque and then continue. But not bad at all!

very nice i agree to most points with Hule i liked the falshback but i dint enjoy the long duel from only 1 (ok maybe 2 >.>) camera position at least it became better at the end. Also gonna say the same and add more cuz i find dthem important:

1. script is good but direction and sciptwriting has to be communictae even more
2. try to film a scene some times. it would make editing even harder but the result will be even better
3. dont add scenes just to add. imagine ur result and then film

and now part that i blieve its really important in jk2 movies. DUEL:
1. dont make them long. if u want to make them more than it should be make them inetersting
2. use a combination of many moves
3. dont kick so much
4. a moving camera and from many different angles may give a really good result and action in ur duel

Dman i also gonna start making some movies i have in my mind for months now XD ( i hope i make it with my single core CPU... >.>)
Also a help form others members wil make a film way better ask it, im sure they will offer it
anyway keep it up guys
gratz again ^^

I liked these comments Huley and Jim , Jermaine <3
That will help us for sure
I'll hope that I will remember everything that you said for the second episode lol...

It would have been better if instead of the bloke saying that he will DIE! when he is doing an emote you cant kill him, instead he has to undo that emote and then get killed, which we never see.

Maybe have that person bind /kill so that it looks better =]

Otherwise probably your best so far lads - keep it up

Have people do voices like matt did, that way its btter to watch


And its no mercy*

Not pity xD

Razor wrote:Have people do voices like matt did, that way its btter to watch


And its no mercy*

Not pity xD

Awesome
Kk And actually my voice is shitty I'll need some voice <.<

I can help <_<

he doesnt want shitty voices ras. jk Xd yea there are plenty people that want to help

Yay I'll need severals voices ; I'll tell you when I'll have finished episodes 2 & 3 and when I'll need it

Try some editing and filming techniques. Stylized violence etc, like Tarantino movies xD

i dont like jk2 movies <.<

Joel - xzi wrote:i dont like jk2 movies <.<

lol xD
at least they r creative some of the times ^^
tahts something cool and teh fact that many ppl coopeate to make a result

>/M/' wrote:like Tarantino movies xD

Keep dreaming I actually can't become like him xD

Bunuel never give up... have an example Like he said like tarantino how he makes movies is pretty easy if you tnink of it.. He takes a situation like KILLING SOME1 and nomally some1 would do it at midnight a rainy night and some creepy music. Tarentino has a sunny day happy feelings balbla talking everything fine and then kills some1.. Break the routine bunuel thats what keeps people intressting

Falc0n wrote:Bunuel never give up... have an example Like he said like tarantino how he makes movies is pretty easy if you tnink of it.. He takes a situation like KILLING SOME1 and nomally some1 would do it at midnight a rainy night and some creepy music. Tarentino has a sunny day happy feelings balbla talking everything fine and then kills some1.. Break the routine bunuel thats what keeps people intressting

I hope I'll do my best <.<
So , I need actually 3 voices : 3 volunteers
Waiting for answers....
Thanks in advance
Was thinking about Huni or Jascha idk and another person...